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Sunday, May 22, 2016

Descriptive Writing - Carter

2 comments:

  1. Well done Carter. You've written a solid character description about your Nana. For BTB next time you could include a sentence talking about something your Nana often says to you. Good effort.

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  2. Fantistic character description of Nana Carter, love the bit about her skin and i laughed to myself for ages.

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